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Chapter #8

Dad gets new interests

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
You had always loved your dad. He treated you like his own son since you was a baby. But the candies had already started to corrupt you. You didn't remember it as it really was, you remembered that Erin had been dad's favorite. That dad thought of her as his real child and you was just his wife's boy. Resentment grew in you, not just for your dad, but also for Erin. You now thought of Erin not as your little sister, but now you thought of her as "the little princess who stole you dad's love." You didn't mean princess in a good way. This is why you wanted her to know what is happening but not be able to do anything about it. That reminded you since you still had a candy in your mouth. "I wish that Erin couldn't let anyone know that something is happening here." You was going to make it so that no one would believe her if she told anyone, but it's better this way. There is a certain horror in when something is happening and you can't do anything about it. Not even confide in a friend.

Now that Erin is handled, the next thing is to get this 'revenge' on the road for dad. You wanted something slow. Something that you could watch and that would build, just like your imagined anger which had been building since you was two years old and Erin had stolen all your father's affection from you. But no one can steal one's affection. It's your affection to give and in your mind dad had chosen not to give it so he should be the one. Even if he wouldn't notice anything was wrong. So you made a wish. It was a small wish. It was a subtle wish, but it would start the ball rolling.

"I wish that dad would lose all of his enjoyment for sports and replace it with an enjoyment of woman's fashions, especially teen fashions."

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1. A couple days after the wish

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2. A couple of weeks after the wish

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