This choice: The other voice protests! • Go Back...Chapter #32Urd is sent back by: Drez  
"I don't think so, you stupid bitch" said that stern voice again from YOUR mouth! You instantly cover your mouth with both hands. Urd turns around and is giving you the evil eye. Since Urd is half-demon, she CAN give you the evil eye...and you try to look anywhere but Urd's eyes, but you're glued to them. Urd comes over to you and slaps you across the face.
"OUCH! THAT HURT, YOU LITTLE WHORE!" There's go that stern voice again!
"WHAT DID YOU...?!" asked Urd.
"It's wasn't me!" you yell in your normal voice. "it's Mozenrath!"
"NOT QUITE Mozenrath, you twit" you say in the stern voice.
"Not quite Mozenrath?" asked Urd.
"Let's just go and get the Jizzarl Flowers" you say in normal voice.
"NO!"
"We're going!" yells Urd, grabbing you by the sruff of your neck and forces you to walk with her. The endless desert is all around the three of you, and it's tottally desolate. The stern voice is still protesting, using your voice to insult Urd and her parentage. After you insult her mother, Urd throws you down...HARD!!
"I had it with you, mortal" said Urd. "you've gone too far this time! THIS MEANS PUNISHMENT!"
"But it's not me!" you plead to Urd, getting on your hands and knees and pleading with this goddess.
"Urd!" yelled W.O.E. "it's not his fault! It's the curse"
"Yeah" said the stern voice. "trust the little angel whore"
"You can pick those flowers by yourself" said Urd, walking away from you.
"Good riddance" said the stern voice.
"NO!" you yell in your normal voice. "don't leave me, Urd! Please!" But Urd is out of earshot by now and it looks like she's not coming back! You start to cry.
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Later, as you walk in the desert, you feel yourself loosing your strength. You're going to die out here in the desert, with that stern voice as company! As you crest a large sand dune, you see that there's a village off in the distance. No...it's not a village. It's the remains of a fairly large county fair. Who would have a fair so far out in the desert?
"DON'T go there" said the stern voice. "you'll regret it"
"Like I would trust you" you say. "and WHO ARE YOU, ANYWAY?!"
"You'll find out" said the stern voice slyly. "just don't go to that fair"
"Why shouldn't I?" you ask.
"Because it's the home of a rat named Templeton" said a voice from just behind you! You whirl around to see Urd standing there!
"You came back!" you say, glad to see the norse goddess. Urd doesn't look pleased, though.
"The Big Boss Lady sent me back to make sure you don't die" said Urd.
"The Big Boss Lady?" you ask. "who's that?"
"Someone who is extremely short" said Urd, looking skyward and raising her voice slightly. You look skyward, but the only thing you can see is the sun.
"You don't need you" said the stern voice. "leave!"
"The Big Boss Lady told me about you, Mr. Stern Voice" said Urd. "Mr. Not-Quite Mozenrath--whatever that means. Now, we should steer clear of that fair down there"
"Why?" you ask.
"It's the home of Templeton the rat" said Urd.
"So...?" you ask. "Wait...Templeton? You mean from Charlotte's Web?"
"Bingo!" said the stern voice. "give that boy a cigar!"
"So what's that gotta do with keeping away?" you ask.
"Templeton eats everything and everyone that gets near him" said Urd.
"That little rat?" you ask.
"He isn't so little anymore" said Urd. "we should get out of here before he sees us"
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