This choice: Templeton has spotted you! • Go Back...Chapter #33Damn dirty rat... by: Aerodeth   After all that youve said to Urd (despite the fact that it wasnt really YOU that said it!) you do NOT want to get on her bad side again... and to keep from doing that, you need to do EXACTLY as she says and keep your friggin mouth shut!
Unfortunately, the amusement park is HUGE, so going around it might take it too long. The quickest way out would have to be through it, but then again, youre most likely to be caught by Templeton. Besides, Urd said steer clear of it, so that's what youre gonna do.
"Wow, when are you ever gonna grow a pair?" the voice whispered to you. "SHUT UP!" you whisper back!
Speaking of which, as all of you continue walking down the path (with the exception of World of Elegance who was hovering around Urd's side), you still feel bad about what happened earlier.
"Um... Urd?" you try to speak up. All that comes out of her is "Hmm."
"Look, uh... Im really sorry about earlier," you apologize, "I didnt mean any of those things that came out of my mouth. Especially about Hi-" Before you could mention HER name, Urd immediately turned her head to you and glared at you with that near-demonic stare of hers! After edging the point-of-no-return, you decide the best option would be to shut up.
"Dont worry Steve," thankfully, you hear the angel's heavenly voice sooth your pain, "She'll come around."
"Thanks, Elegance," you thank her in thought. But the stern voice whispers again, "You REALLY wanna nail that thing, dont you?"
"For the last time... SHUT...UP!"
*BAAANNNNGGG* Before you and the voice could go at it, you heard a loud sound that sounded like a bang.
"Whoa! What was that, Urd? ...Urd? .....URD?!"She doesnt answer. You assume she's still pretty pissed off, but when you turn your head to see her, she's face-down on the ground, not moving!
"URD!!" you lean down and check her. She's still breathing. The woman's still alive, but out cold! What the hell did that?
"Heads up!" the stern voice warned you. "Huh?" you look up... JUST in time to see a big furry first hit you STRAIGHT smack in the face!
*POOOOOOWWW!!* Everything goes black....
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"HEY! Wake up you worthless sack of rat shit!!" that pleasant sound of that bastard voice wakes you up from you slumber! "Ughh...." you slowly wake up aching... mostly your face is hurting from that fist to your face. If you had to guess, that was probably Templeton.
"Damn rat," the voice mutters, "I'll skin that fat waste of-" You ignore HIM and look around at where you are. All you see are reflections of yourself all over... it's a room full of mirrors. Could you perhaps be in the Hall of Mirrors? Well, it beats waking up inside the stomach of a giant rat...
Speaking of which, you realized something. Urd's not here! Neither is W.O.E.!
"Urd?!" you look around only to spot your own reflection all over the place, "Where's Urd?!"
"Who cares?" the voice replied in his uncaring tone, "let's just get outta here before that rat finds us!" Although youre worried about her (or more worried about the angel), there's not much you can do. But before you can even think of getting out of the park, you gotta get out of the House of Mirrors.
"I want her. She will grand attraction to the KaibaZoo Im opening up."
"No way! Not MY daughter! She's coming home. Back to Hell where she belongs! No more following that little midget's orders."
What the hell? You can overhear a conversation going on...
"Whatever she plans on paying you, I'll double it! I need that angelic creature as our signature display! We'll have the very first angel in captivity..." said the familiar smooth-yet-demanding male voice.
"PST! Take the angel! I dont care, just give ME Urd." said the familiar carefree feminine voice.
"Whatever. Do what you want with the women....Just give ME the boy," said another familiar voice, but sounds a little more dark and sinister..., "Or rather, just give me his cursed arm. I dont need the rest of his body."
Apparently two of the voices seemed to be talking about Urd... could the third be talking about you?
"Heheheh! Relax, everybody!" said that weasely voice you recognize as Templeton, "We can all come to some sort of agreement. After all, sales arent final!"
'Sales arent final'? What the hell does that mean?
"It means that rat is planning on selling you and that divine whore like used cars," the voice answers! ....WHAT?! Templeton's gonna sell you?! Well, I guess you'd understand, since he IS a dirty rat... but who is he planning on selling you to? Those voices did sound familiar... Maybe you should sneak closer toward those voices to find out.
"FORGET IT!" the voice already knew what you were thinking, "let's just get out of this place! Ive had enough fun for tonight..." Perhaps he's got a point. Maybe it'd best to just run... but then again, what about Urd? And W.O.E?
"...God youre soft."   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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