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Rated: E · Poetry · Biographical · #2327778
He picked flowers for me while on a walk with the dog.


Thoughtfulness




He picked field flowers last week. Dying now,
petals fall on my keyboard.
I smile, type around them.













The Kimo is the Israeli version of the Japanese Haiku.
Content: like haiku, usually image-specific and acts as a still life,
or snapshot, of a single moment
Form: made up of a single stanza of three lines

Syllable Count:
[Line 1] 10 syllables
[Line 2] 7 syllables
[Line 3] 6 syllables
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