I'm no stranger to writing; as a child I wrote stories until one day the idea just kind of slipped away, then years later I rediscovered a strong passion for it. The time in between has left my technique weak but I hope to improve. Ever notice those 'How to' books that stress only a small percantage of people get published? I'll keep at this until im a crazy old man - whatever it takes to discover my own voice. Don't hesitate in a critic; improvement is more important then selfish ego!