I would love to get some positive feed back on my story "Jessica." I have posted three chapters of it here. What do you think of it? It is actually a "follow on" from another story, "The big white gum tree." Several of the characters appear in both stories. Jessica is the psychotic and vengeful daughter of the beautiful "Lydia" who dies in the first story. As the lover of Lydia commits suicide Jessica focuses her hatred on Jackie, the widow of Dom (Lydia's lover) I intended Jessica to be "Book Two" of "The big white gum tree." Should I do that or should they be completely separate stories?