what is it like

before i write this down i just want to state that it has to deal with someone very close to me so i really would like all feed back negative or positive because it is kind of a guess on what they went through. thank you




In a dark shadow grim
The last of my light grows dim
Drowning off my cries of solitude
My mind sees only that which is crude
These thoughts which harass my brain,
My will, my pride, they start to drain.
With the black comes lack of air
As i begin ripping and tearing out my hair
What is it in me thats so dark
Feeding my anger like a shark
Intrust in urges i shall not
Surpress the urge to see a blood spot
Death is what i see it could be
The only way i can go free
Cold steel now against my wrist
Ending life, starting eternal bliss
So simple so simple the awnser is
Take it now drain ones life
Family will be the only ones to morn
Out of sight and will forget i know i'm right
They may forge a new life
One that could bring back pride
And cause people to sing your name in stride
So why do i pause at the chance to be great
this chance to be one of the stars.