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Rated: E · Poetry · Romance/Love · #879499
It's a poem wow what a surprise. hey amazingly enough i actually modified it :)
Little does she realize,
The power of her eyes.
What fate befalls us fools,
Who tumble in those pools?

Casually to condemn,
All those who can not swim.
Even adrift at sea,
There is more hope for me.

In blue without end,
We're only to descend.
Oh to think one can drown,
Incapable of sound.

Frozen, I can not move,
Till her blink does approve,
To allow my release.
Still her sway does increase,

With her turning away.
All barriers do decay.
Wanting air I revive.
I'm free, but not alive!

Gone in a mere glance.
There but for whim of chance,
Ensnared forever more
In the eyes I adore.
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