Poetry Newsletter for August 12

         Someone asked me, "How can I learn to write free verse? I always think of poetry as rhymed and with certain meter."

         Hmmm . . . how does one learn to use free verse? Maybe I can help.

Vivian

Writing Free Verse

         After studying and writing poetry since I was in the third grade, over fifty years now, I have come to the conclusion that the more I learn, the more there is to learn. Everytime I turn around, I discover another form or type of poetry. Some of the forms I have tried; others I decided not to use or examine too closely (the names alone sounded like diseases). I use free verse most often in my writing because it gives me the freedom to explore word usage, theme, and imagery that structured forms can't.

         "But how do you write in free verse?" someone asked. "I thought poetry had to rhyme and have a certain number of syllables in each line."

          No, free verse can have some rhyme, but rhyme isn't required. Any rhyme in free verse cannot have a scheme or pattern, and free verse cannot have a pattern of set numbers of syllables in its lines. Not having a rhythm scheme, though, does not mean that free verse doesn't have its own smooth flow. It does, just not any kind of pattern.

         Here are two examples of free verse, one with some rhyme, one without any rhyme.

With rhyme:

Disappointments  (ASR) Some memories hurt #851083 by Vivian

Without rhyme:

Fantasy or Life  (ASR) Give me reality and life with my dreams. #874201 by Vivian

         "Then," the questioner continues, "anything that sort of looks like poetry is free verse?"

         Not exactly, my friend (yes, I know that's a fragment, but fragments can be used for effect). Writing any kind of poetry means that poetic language and devices are used. Poetry and prose not only appear different on the page or screen, they sound different. Poetry is more concise and precise, reduced to exact concentrated images.

         "I'm lost." The questioner frowns in confusion.

          Okay, what about an example? Teachers always have folders and files full of examples. Let's look first at a very short prose (prose is written material which is not poety):

The church stood tall upon the hill as it overlooked the community. Its bell rang through the clear morning air, calling people to come and worship. Soon the pews filled and music rose to the heavens while families and friends joined one another in thanksgiving.

         The paragraph is not poetry, but could be made into poetry without worrying about rhyme or meter (rhythm). However, simply writing the same words and sentences in short spurts of lines isn't the same as poetry; although, the wording is rather poetic in a way.

         First let's see what kind of poetic devices we might use: alliteration (the repetition of beginning sounds used for effect) for one, since we can see church and community already in the paragraph as well as clear, calling, come. If we use all those words, correctly close together, we have alliteration.

         Next, what can we use as a metaphor (the comparison of unlike things saying one is the other) or simile (the comparison of unlike things saying one is like or as the other)? We could compare the church with something or the bell with something. The church, like a guardian, watched over the community; the bell, a crying messenger, rang out its call.

         Maybe we can insert an oxymoron (the use of contradictory terms, together, for effect). Living death is an oxymoron. Heavenly sin is another. What might we use in this poem that we're going to write? Since we are talking about a community of people joining together, and mention family and friends, what about something like friendly enemies? Or maybe that isn't a good example, we'll see.

         Now we have some ideas that we can use in our free verse poem. Notice we haven't tried to put together any rhymes or to choose a pattern of syllables because we don't care. We want to express our ideas and the poetic meanings.

Like a benign guardian,
the church sits upon a hill,
caring for the community below.
The bell, a crying messenger,
rings forth its call to all
through the crystal clear air
of early morning's light.

         What do we have so far? I see alliteration, metaphor, and simile, no rhyme, and no rhythm scheme. So we have the start of a poem in free verse. Let's continue.

The pews fill as music swells,
sending songs heavenward.
Kith and ken gather
to worship and to rejoice,
thankful that for one day
friendly enemies can forget
any distrust or discord.

         We find some more alliteration and our oxymoron in that stanza. Still there is no rhyme, but there could be if we wished, as long as we didn't set up a pattern. Any lines that have the same meter, or number of syllables, is accidental, not a pattern or scheme.

         Oh, one last comment, free verse does not mean don't use needed punctuation or capitalization. As I searched for examples of free verse, I found many that didn't have punctuation (which caused ideas and thoughts to run together) and didn't have capitalization, which distracts from the meaning.

         I hope I've helped you understand a bit more about writing free verse. Try it and see what you can create.

Link for examples of devices:

Poetry Terms and Devices  (E) Identifying major poetry terms and devices #662052 by Vivian

Some of the Site's Better Free Verse

Cancer  (ASR) Cancer is not as advertised. #778167 by Jacque Graham

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The River Of Life  (E) A free verse poem about the flow of life as a river. #871173 by Harry

Feedback from July's Newsletter

From mysofheart

Wow Viv,
I left with so much info. This has to be one of the best newsletters I have read. You are the type of person that makes paths not follows them. Hugs ~ Softy

Wow! That's a great compliment. *lifts handy, dandy machette and goes forward to make more paths*


From roobear1

Awesome job, Viv! I am saving this newsletter, so next time when I write a poem, it will be easier.

Thanks, Roo. I hope I can continue to provide helpful information.


From BabyFace-18

Thank you for coming up with such a list of alternatives. I know that as a writer, sometimes that's one of the hardest things to do. I have a poem that I think is very descriptive and doesn't use a lot of commonplace words. It's called "The Awakening (revised)" and the item # is 867792. Check it out! God bless! -BabyFace-18

I'll check that poem, and if it fits anything I'm writing about, I'll highlight it. Uh, well, I just did.



From billwilcox

Once again, Viv, you have shown the proper way to write a newsletter. Very informative and a great read,
W.D.


From mousybrown

Ms. Viv,

Again you have turned out an inspiring and educational newsletter. I LOVE the poems you picked to share with us! Thanks.


From woman

I enjoyed reading this newsletter it was very helpful and insightful.

Sincerly,
Ayesha


Thanks, Bill, Janne, and Ayesha. I'm glad you find the newsletter helpful, informative, educational. I hope it continues to be.


From n03113

This is my first newsletter I've ever recieved from writing.com. Usually I hate newsletters due to their uselessness. However I am amazed, like a bright eyes newbie would be, that this newsletter is so useful! It just proves to me that this website is outstanding in their professional goal of helping writers develop their talent. Thank you so much!

Gulp. I don't know what to say. I'm honored and hope I never disappoint you.

         Until next time, may you read and write beautiful poetry.

Viv