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Rated: E · Fiction · Sci-fi · #2337186
It was weird until the half point party and then it went nuts
The Dawn Treader hummed through the void, carrying fifty souls on humanity’s first pilgrimage to Mars. The crew—scientists, engineers, dreamers—had trained for years, their ship a marvel of precision and planning. Three months into the six-month journey, oddities began to surface.


It started small. Lieutenant Chen found a steaming cup of jasmine tea—her grandmother’s recipe—waiting on her console, though the ship’s rations offered only instant coffee. Engineer Patel stumbled across a wrench he’d longed for, its grip molded perfectly to his hand, despite never requisitioning it. Whispers spread: lost trinkets reappeared, childhood snacks materialized in lockers. The crew chalked it up to fatigue, pranks, or secret stashes—until the halfway party.


The celebration marked 90 days, a raucous affair of synthetic wine and laughter in the galley. Exhausted, the crew retired to their pods, leaving Ensign Riley alone on watch. He slumped in the command chair, staring at the red speck of Mars on the viewscreen. “I wish we were there already,” he muttered, half-asleep.


A shudder rippled through the ship. Alarms blared. Riley jolted upright as the viewscreen filled with the rust-hued curve of Mars, impossibly close. The Dawn Treader was orbiting the planet—three months early.


The crew awoke to chaos and wonder. Captain Caveman ordered diagnostics: the ship’s logs showed no anomalies, yet here they were. Dr. Mwangi, the physicist, proposed a wild theory: human minds, unmoored from Earth’s billions, were bending reality. On Earth, collective wills clashed and canceled out; here, with only fifty, their desires amplified.


They tested it. Chen imagined a pen; it appeared, ink still wet. Patel wished for a functioning rover—it rolled out of the cargo bay, gleaming. The crew convened, awestruck, and turned their focus to Mars itself. Together, they envisioned a paradise: air thickened to a lush, breathable pressure; oceans swelled across the plains; emerald forests bloomed under a terraformed sky. Days later, they landed on a vibrant world, greeted by creatures of myth—griffins soaring, unicorns grazing—born from their wildest dreams.


As they marveled, Riley, ever the explorer, pictured a starship beyond their own: sleek, faster-than-light, a vessel for the cosmos. It shimmered into existence beside their camp, engines humming with promise.


Mars was no longer just a destination—it was a crucible of creation, and the fifty pioneers its architects. The stars beckoned, and they were ready.
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