The Missing Rainbow (pls help me review)

Jeremy and the Missing Rainbow

1 In a small house near the sea, lived a boy named Jeremy.

2 Jeremy loved watching the sky, especially during sunsets.

3 One cloudy day, Jeremy hoped to see a rainbow.

4 But the rainbow did not appear, and Jeremy felt disappointed.

5 He went back home, feeling sad.

6 Then, he noticed the sun peeking through the clouds.

7 Jeremy decided to wait a little longer, hoping to see the rainbow.

8 He passed the time making shapes with the clouds.

9 Suddenly, a beautiful rainbow stretched across the sky.

10 Jeremy's patience was rewarded with the most colourful rainbow he had ever seen.

11 He learned that sometimes, waiting can bring joy and wonder.

12 Now, whenever Jeremy sees the clouds, he remembers to wait for the rainbow's surprise.