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Rated: E · Fiction · Animal · #2336325
When we get to our closest star, we find we were expected.
The Echolight hummed through the void, its hybrid crew of humans and dolphins threading the needle between Earth’s dreams and Alpha Centauri’s mysteries. Launched in 2087, the ship carried a dozen humans and six uplifted dolphins, their minds augmented with neural chips that let them speak, think, and manipulate tools via robotic proxies. The mission: find habitable worlds. The reality: they’d just stumbled onto something no one could’ve predicted.


“Sonar signatures are… impossible,” clicked Tika, her sleek gray body suspended in the water-filled command pod. Her voice, translated through the chip, carried a melodic skepticism. “It’s a ring. A river ring. In space.”


Captain Mara Ruiz squinted at the holo-display, her dark hair floating in the microgravity. The structure orbiting Alpha Centauri A was a marvel—a toroidal habitat, thousands of kilometers wide, its inner surface a shimmering ribbon of water. Sunlight from the star glinted off it, filtered through an atmospheric shell. “Artificial,” she muttered. “And flowing.”


“Flowing!” chirped Kael, Tika’s pod-mate, his dorsal fin twitching with excitement. “We swim it?”


Mara grinned. “Let’s see what’s down there first.”


The Echolight docked at an entry port, a translucent tube extending to meet the river ring’s edge. Scans showed breathable air for humans and a current-rich waterway for the dolphins—too perfect to be natural. The team suited up: humans in exosuits, dolphins in sleek, water-filled space suits with articulated robotic arms sprouting from the shoulders, controlled by their neural chips. Tika flexed her arms experimentally, clicking in approval. “Better than flukes for fixing.”


Kael shuddered. “Crab-bots are worse.” The tiny, scuttling robots—designed for tight spaces—sat in their charging bays. The dolphins loathed them, their insect-like skittering an affront to cetacean grace.


The river awaited.


Inside, the ring was a paradox: an infinite waterway winding through ecosystems that shifted every few kilometers—coral jungles, kelp forests, glowing plankton seas. The current carried them effortlessly, a conveyor belt of discovery. Tika and Kael swam ahead, their suits’ arms trailing like extra fins, while Mara and engineer Jax followed in a hover-skiff.


“Who built this?” Jax asked, his voice crackling over the comms. “And why?”


Tika clicked thoughtfully, her sonar painting a cavern ahead. “Not who. Why matters. It sings to us.”


The cavern opened into a hub—a floating platform ringed by water, studded with consoles and robotic limbs. A dolphin-like figure emerged from the shadows, its body a shimmering alloy, eyes glowing blue. “Welcome, travelers,” it said, its voice a harmonic blend of clicks and tones. “I am Echo-1, steward of the River.”


Mara’s jaw dropped. “You’re… artificial?”


“Built by the Singers,” Echo-1 replied. “Long gone. They seeded this ring to preserve their kin—us—and to explore eternity. The River flows without end, each bend a new world.”


Kael spun in delight. “Infinite swim!”


Tika’s robotic arm tapped a console, pulling up schematics. “It’s a habitat generator. Self-repairing. Dolphins control it—brain-link tech, like ours.”


Echo-1 nodded. “You are kin. Will you join?”


The plot thickened when the Echolight’s sensors detected a failing fusion node in the ring’s outer shell. If it blew, the River would collapse. Echo-1 couldn’t reach it—its form was bound to the hub. Tika volunteered, her suit’s arms primed for repair work. “I’ll fix,” she said, resolute.


“No crabs.”


Kael protested. “Too tight! Crab-bots—”


“No!” Tika snapped, her clicks sharp. “Arms only.”


Mara and Jax prepped the skiff, towing Tika to the breach. The node sparked, a jagged tear in the hull. Tika’s arms whirred, sealing plates with precision, but a secondary leak erupted—too small for her suit. She froze, sonar pinging the crevice.


“Tika,” Mara said gently, “the crab-bots—”


“Ugly. Wrong.” Tika’s tone wavered, then hardened. “But… necessary.” She linked to a crab-bot, its legs twitching as her mind took over.


Revulsion rippled through her, but she guided it into the gap, welding the leak shut. The node stabilized.


Back at the hub, Tika sulked, shaking off the crab-bot’s echo in her mind. Kael nuzzled her. “Brave swimmer.”


Echo-1 glimmered. “The River is yours now, kin. Stay, or take its secrets home.”


Mara exchanged a look with Tika. “Earth needs this. But we’ll be back.”


The Echolight departed, its crew changed—human and dolphin alike dreaming of an infinite river, and the dolphins who’d mastered it, one reluctant crab-bot at a time.
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