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Rated: E · Other · Research · #2331773
(Poem)the moment of meditation with description .

Closed!my eyes in a peaceful moment ,
Near a sort of water lake where various birds are decent .

Two side of mine in was different type of trees,
To get ride of fruit and flower where was flying some bees .

The water was falling-down by a drain,
Swimming the fishes for own aspect and gain.

By touching water and craying with pleasure-smell the air was coming swiftly ,
My inner state of mind opened to imagine heavenly .

Where musical instrument was playing in every natural tune,
May according of bird song some strange-color of butterfly was dancing on their flower -bed throne.
I heavenly gone with Strange ¡
I heavenly gone!



Description of this poem:
In this poem have discrived about a moment of meditation through a natural situation where the different natural things
Are helping to realize this moment.

in this poem in the first line has discrived about a 'moment' which is peacfull ;it is the first condition of meditation without this condition meditation cannot be done.
Then in the second sentence of it has discribed about a place, like a 'water lake' it is another condition for getting meditation because without a precise place meditation can not be done.

Then have discrived about different type of natural thing were placed in this place ,these were giving a proper refresmnt in the mind and meditating the organ deeply trough the breath taking these descriptions have in the next four line.

In the second sentence of fourth line like, 'my inner state of mind is opened' in this hase third condition for getting meditation because the core of mind has to be deeply attentive with nature and natural thing's activation.
Without this the meditation can not be done.

And in the sixth line ' I heavenly gone with srange ,I heavenly heavenly gone' have the realization of the perfection that the meditation has done precisely.

In the sixth line, the 'bird song' is key point of meditation time; according of this song the every nature and natural things are activiting like song's instrument where butterfly is a dancer .

Others: In this poem have six line where the starting of this poem by a first participle word like, 'closed' and all of this poem line is situated with past and past continuous tense.

In this poem, the second sentence of fourth line is a part of pirst sentence of first line where after closing the eyes the inner state of mind be opened then the all natural activation be realized and in both of these sentence has a past participle like 'closed' and 'opened'

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