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Rated: GC · Fiction · Horror/Scary · #2222297
A Macro story featuring my character Amanda Bradanska the Fox

(Note: The following is a mature macro-themed story based on a roleplay between a friend on Discord, and myself. This story is non-canon to my Dimensional Wars and intended for an adult audience, viewer discretion is advised.)

Act One: Some Really Bad Wine.

Amanda Bradanska was walking into a nearby winery that one fine morning in a city recently occupied by the Order of Moebius and her own army. While she didn't care much for cheaper and more mass produced wine she found here, she knew she had to get her fix of alcohol after not having it for a while so she entered the winery and began to look around. The black fured dainty vixen in her normal green dress and brown slippers calmly entered the winery store and casually looked around. Yet as she did the air would fill with her natural ominous presence of her psychic brainwaves.

"O....oh, welcome, Lady Amanda!" the owner of the winery who personally knew her said as he nervously walked to her and bowed down slightly to her with his back.

"Si, it is me. I am looking for some wine. What is your most expensive brand?" She asks.

"H....here, we kept this just for you after we were informed of your arrival!" The man said as he took out a rather mysterious secret brand of wine from the others.

Soon the owner went to take a wine bottle and brought it to her, while all workers were watching, a lot of tension was in the air, apparently. Whether Amanda could sense it with her psychic powers and just attributed it to her natural reputation, or she was completely oblivious to said tension remained a mystery.

"Hmm, very good. Let me take a sampling shot if you will." She said, clearly conceited as ever.

"S....sure, sure !" The owner said wearily.

One of the workers gave a glass to the owner before the mobian pub owner poured a bit of the wine inside the tiny shot glass and he gave the glass over to her. They seemed to have pulled it out of stock from a separate table under the counter and not from the others. Amanda believed this was simply because it was a special premium brand, they did not sell to the general public to simply profit off of their main ones, or at least for really wealthy customers.

"Very good, cheers." She said as she took the glass and gave a fake smile before sipping it down.

The owner would nervously watch and wait for her to finish, as would the other workers as the atmosphere in the pub would go silent. Still, Amanda leisurely finished taking her shot of wine and then put the tiny cup down, clearly with an unimpressed expression.

"H....h.....how is it, Lady Bradanska?" The bar owner asks.

"Hmmm, it isn't like in mio own country, too much alcohol and not enough grapes...but it will have to do." She said as she sighed.

"W....we apologize for that. We will make sure to fix that problem as soon as possible!" the bar owner replies trying to appease her in fear of her powers.

"Ugh, it's fine. It is your country's fault, but yes next time cut down on the alcohol and add more flavor. "She said as she waved her hand around rather nonchalantly.

"We will, we promise!" The owner said even more nervously as he bowed down with his back several times, sweating and clearly terrified.

"Very well. I'll take the bottle then. Just in case I run out of my imported brands." She said as a slight jab at them.

"Sure, sure, take it! There is no problem at all!" The owner replied.

"Very well, how much?" She said as she levitated the bottle into her hands.

"Oh no no no, I would never make you pay for that! You are a special guest for us!" The bar owner 'generously' offers.

"Oh? Well grazie then, it's good to get some recognition from the plebeians every now and then."

"U...um....y....yes, you're correct, Lady Bradanska...." The owner said still nervously, with one of the workers secretly smirking and looking at the bottle in her hands, before he left the room together with the others except for the owner.

"Very well then, I shall be off now. Addio." She said as she turns around and walks towards the door

"A....addio, Lady Bradanska...."the owner said as he sighed in relief after he saw the fox heading to the exit door

The door would slowly open in front of her with her telekinesis as she slowly walked through it and then closed as she continued walking, almost supernaturally. She then would daintily head down the sidewalk will a rather tranquil smile as she would move out of the window and disappear from view. The owner then took a from his pocket and started to use it to take off sweat from his head, sighing again, and taking a cigarette as well.

"Damn, I'm not paid enough for this shit...." the owner mutters to himself.

Amanda soon begins to head down the street, all the while toting the glass bottle in her hand and humming a Spagonian melody.Suddenly however, she begins to feel something inside of her, as some parts of her body such as legs and arms began to twitch more times and without any control. In the meantime, all the civilians who met her on the street quickly bowed down or walked away out of fear.

"Ugh...this stuff must have been worse than I thought." She said as she looks at the wine bottle in her hands.

"That, or I need to stop doing workouts in the morning..."The muscle spasms continue to increase with each passing moment. Soon the pain would become agonizingly apparent. *

"Ack! Did I work out too hard this morning, or....those bastards!" She let out realizing she may have been drugged.

"Ugh! Someone call a fucking ambulance!" She yells as she twitches

The pain soon spread in her entire body, as the street around her was now empty since most people just left or outright escaped after they saw her passing by. Nobody hears her, as nobody was on that street in that moment....it seems her scary and frightening reputation backfired against her this time around. The entire street is abandoned as she wallows in pain.

"Grrrrrrrrraaagh! A curse on you all too!" she lets out as she falls over in pain.

Suddenly things around her started to become more and more small, as her body was growing in size while the pain became even worse. She went through an excruciatingly painful amount of pain, as if she were having a second sudden growth spurt. Every part of her body burned and stretched in all directions as she let out a roaring shout of agony, yet she also believed she was losing her mind when she saw things getting smaller and smaller.

"Ugh! What type of fucking poison did I drink?!?" She said as she whaled out in pain.

She kept growing larger and larger, as two civilians who were still on the street stared at her with wide open eyes, and after just few minutes they were both bug-sized compared to her. Her feet would burst out of her tiny shows and would tear into pieces as her dress would now begin to tear and rip around her shoulders and her legs.

"My shoes and dress! NOOOOOOO!!!!!" She lets out.

"WHAT DID THOSE IDIOTAS DO TO ME?!?" She yells out as she slams her fist onto the street in anger, making some cars jump and some trashcans fall over.

There were two people who were watching this astonishing and terrifying transformation, a young adult couple of a taller male canine and a smaller female feline. Both were curious as to what was going on when Amanda started to enlarge, yet both now could only stare in disbelief and shock as the whiteness this monstrous transformation. Soon the female and then the male would both let out screams of terror.

"HUH? OH SHUT UP YOU TWO!" She said as she exclaims and looks at them.

"P....please, don't hurt us !" they both said as they pleaded for mercy, while they instantly stumbled backwards in terror until their backs touched the side of a house behind them.

She then slowly reaches down to grab them. The two mobians just kept begging for mercy while they let out screams of fear until Amanda scooped them both up in her massive hand as she cuffs them in her palm and slowly begins to stand upright with them clasped in her gigantic hand. Soon she would stand back upright and then lift her hand up to her massive face and gigantic green eyes as they would fit in her palm.

"Please, spare our lives! "The two minuscule Mobians said as they were sitting literally in the palm of her massive hand.

The two mobians continued to plead for mercy, while soon many more civilians saw the giantess as she was standing in her 90m of size and she was towering over part of the city.

"NO." She simply replied as she stared down at them and then slowly began to slowly open her mouth.

"N....no, please, don't do it, PLEASE!" they plead and scream loudly, while all the other citizens just watched that scene with shock from the ground.

Amanda then tosses them into her mouth as she then begins to swish them around and looks downwards. She could see dozens and dozens of other mobians looking up at her shocked and terrified, while screams of the couple kept being heard from inside of the screaming couple in her mouth. Amanda swallows the two trapped in her maw as she gazed down at the intimidated masses of people. Never has she had so much people pay attention to her. Panic began to spread in the entire city as all the mobians who witnessed that scene soon started to flee and run away from the clearly carnivorous and monstrous sized vixen.

"YOU SHOULD HAVE ALL HELPED ME." She said as she began to stomp forwards, towards the winery. Her massive feet crushing into cars and leaving massive imprints into the pavement as she would even allow her gigantic foxy tail to sway and smash into buildings next to her, now on a stampede of merciless destruction.

"S....stop right there !!!!" She heard in native Spagonian.

Amanda could soon hear a feeble shout coming from behind her, as a Greater Spagonian mobian cop was pointing a pistol at her, though with his legs trembling and his head sweating in fear. This surprised the ninety-meter vixen, to hear someone from her own country bark orders out to her as she slowly turned around and stated downwards.

"OH? A TINY PIG IS DEMANDING ME TO STOP? PFFT! HA HA HA!" She said, clearly amused by this.

"S-Signora Bradanska. I don't know what is happening here, but I can't allow you to get this far and harm our people, i don't care what the Baron says!" The cop said as he tried to muster the courage to point a gun that was several hundred times his own size.

"I AM WHO KNOWS HOW MANY METERS TALL, AND YOU WANT TO ORDER ME AROUND?" She said as she then put out her hand and fingers and tried to fling him away with her telekinesis, only for it to not work.

"CAZZO...." She mumbled, something was clearly not right with her psychic powers as she could not even fling this tiny insect away and send them flying with her mind.

"I....if you don't stop, I will open fire! I...I am not joking, Lady Bradanska! You went too far this time!" The man said as he would twitch and had issues aiming his gun due to nervousness, luckily his target was larger than the broad side of a barn to aim at.

"OH PLEASE, JUST BECAUSE I CANNOT FLING YOU INTO ORBIT WITH MY MIND, DOESN'T MEAN I CANNOT FLING YOU WITH MY FINGERS." She said as she leaned over him and brought her massive hand closer to him.

"S....STOP !!!" the cop shouted loud again before he finally opened fire and he shot any ammo he had against the hand of the giantess

These would literally only cause her to pause, but mostly as the bullets would bounce off her massive fingers and body. The cop just opened wide his eyes in surprise before he slowly dropped down his handgun and he started to move back from her with his entire body trembling like a leaf.

"WHAT IS THE MATTER, INSECT? YOUR LITTLE GUN ISN'T 'STOPPING' ME?" She said as she smirked.

"Y....you can't do this, you can't!!!" the officer said to her almost having an anxiety attack.

"I CAN, LIKE THIS." She said as she then would put down her fingers and flick him, very far.The man then let out a loud scream before after few seconds he was launched kilometers away into the air.

"THIS IS FUN." She said as she stood back upright and put her hand on her massive hips as she grinned fiendishly.

"HMMMMM, FIRST THINGS ARE FIRST. TIME FOR REVENGE." She said as she stomps towards the winery, now everything she could see was just panic and fleeing mobians, as the entire place was now in chaos as she slowly stomped towards the winery.

Meanwhile, the group of workers and the pub owner were wiping off their tables and the bar stools as they tried to act inconspicuous to the events prior to what happened before. They believed that Amanda could perhaps have died from the bad brew or perhaps she was taken to the hospital, yet Order officials were probably going to cover it up and not release it to the public. However, all stopped as they would hear loud booms that would come closer and closer towards their bar. Soon the entire building would shake, and glasses of wine would fall off the shelves and burst into pieces as the entire drinking establishment was becoming rattled.

"What the heck is happening, is this an earthquake, or what ?!" one of the workers asked the owner of the business.

THOOM THUD THOOM!


As whatever approached the bar, they would see glasses of wine that still were on the tables rattle with each seismic shake. Soon they would become more frequent, whatever it was, was very big and very near. All of them would go into a concerned panic, but they had no idea just what was coming right towards them.

"What the hell is this ?!?"the owner shouted even louder, as his workers were going in panic and soon many of them went outside and tried to escape from the winery.

A terrifying sight would then occur, soon her massive foot would stomp right down on a yellow car parked just outside from view of the window. With one massive step, Amanda would utterly crush this rather tacky looking vehicle that belonged to the bar owner as if it were made of tinfoil. This would cause the entire building to shake widely, making the employees fall over and give the roaring sound as if a bombed have just been dropped. The owner opened wide his eyes in shock.

"IT'S ME AGAIN, AMANDA. I HAVE COME TO THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL 'GIFT' YOU PUT IN THAT WINE." She said, clearly messing with them.

"PERHAPS I CAN REPAY YOU BY TEACHING YOU A VALUABLE LESSON, A FINAL LESSON. DO YOU KNOW
WHAT IT IS?" Amanda asks them all inside the building, with her massive ears listening in.

The owner and his workers just kept hiding inside the structure, he did not dare to come out from that place, and he had no intention of doing so after hearing the loud voice of Amanda. They were all too confused and afraid to decipher just was what was going on. She was supposed to be dead, not some sort of giant. All the owner could deduce is somehow the 'mystical' brand of poison he gave her, somehow did not work on the witch as he would have expected.

"I WILL TAKE YOUR SILENCE AS A 'NO'. THE LESSON IS: THE BEST WINE GRAPES ARE CRUSHED INTO PERFECTION." She said as she slowly lifted her other massive foot and leg.

"W....what?" the owner said as his face went cold with confusion and nervousness, but what she said somehow got into his mind. He slowly went out of his hiding place and peeked out of a window from inside

"LIKE THIS." She said as she would begin to stomp down onto his entire store.

"N....NO, NO !!!" He let out as he saw a massive shadow come over his establishment from outside.

Soon he would try to flee the building, as would the others, but unfortunately her massive sole would touch the building and make the entire ceiling shake as bits and pieces of the roof would come down.

"N....NO, PLEASE, LADY BRADANSKA ! HAVE MERCY, I HAVEN'T DONE ANYTHING WRONG !!!" one of the workers exclaims.

"I HAVE NOT TIME TO CONVERSE WITH INSECTS, ESPECIALLY DEAD ONES..." She said as she presses her massive foot down on the entire building and slowly grinds it into ruin beneath her. The entire building was totally flattened down, and the screams and shouts of the man totally ceased.

"THAT IS DONE...NOW WHAT CAN ELSE CAN I DO AT THIS SIZE?" She said as she looks around, thinking of all the possibilities of how to use her now gargantuan stature and newfound strength to her advantage. This bizarre day had just begun for her, but she thought to make the most of it.

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