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This story has murder and abuse...with a happy ending soon...this is part one out of 18
Jane:Hi kids how was your day?
Ana:It was ok! But im 7 and he's 6 shouldn't he be pushed?
Jane:Excuse me?! pushed!?!?
Ana:Yeah! Jake said if your born in january you should be pushed in the ditch and he pushed me in the ditch!!! Its not fair!
Jane:Jake im going to get your father to talk to you tonight! Go to your bedroom and do home work! Both of you!
(Later that night)
Jane:So today jake told ana that since she was born in january that she had to be pushed in the ditch and plus he was born in january too! Can you talk to jake for me david?
David:Yeah i can go talk to him...I will be back in a few minutes.
(He walks to jakes room)
Jake:Hi dad!(hugs his father)
David:Hey son,so good job!
Jake:Good job on what dad?
David:At telling your sister about the january stuff and pushing her into the ditch but,you were born in january..you should have said any one who was born on the 1st of january.
Jake:Haha dad aren't you suspossed to be the adult?
David:Goodnight son...
(Walks out to his wife)
Jane:How dare you!?!?!!?!You encouraged him? How could you ....i now know that im the adult in the family!
David:Whatever jane! Just shut up i dont care if i encouraged him.
Jane:I care for our kids behavior of when they grow up..So they dont end up like you !!
(David and jane go to bed..(next morning)
Ana:Good morning mommy and daddy..
Jake:Hey what about good morning to be ana?
Ana:(ignores him on purpose)
David:Hey stop ignoring him ana!
Jane:Dont yell at her david! Just stop and leave!
David:Whatever just shut up jane you just complain about everything!
Jane:Oh david you just encourage jake to push girls in the ditch!!
Ana:Mom we have to go...bye!
(9:37 am)
Jane:(walking down the hall)David are you done packing your stuff?
David:(jumps out and grabs her by the neck with a knife by janes neck)Shut up jane..i warned you to leave me alone and you didnt listen so just shut up and go into the bedroom now!
(She walks into the bedroom crying)
David:(takes knife and starts slitting her every where until she finally suffers to death)
David:(Drags her into the back yard)
(Kids get home from school at 2:44 pm)
Jake:Daddy wheres mommy? Ana and i can't find her any where!
Ana:I cant find mommy in any of the rooms or in the front yard or back yard...
David:Ok kids go to your room and i will talk to you two in a minute.
(They go into there rooms and david walks into jakes room)
Jake:Daddy there is something sharp in your pocket...Daddy what is it? Daddy tell me!?!?!?!
(Screams)
David:(walks to ana's room)Hey ana
Jake:Hi daddy..where is jake? Why did he scream so loud?
David:Because of this(slits her under her eye and slaps her with the side of the knife)
Ana:(screams and crys)OWWWWW Daddy you did that on accident right?!
(David walks out and locks the door taking the knob off of jake and ana's doors so they cant get out)
(6 weeks later)
Officer:(knocks down the door to davids house while he os at work for the last 20 minutes)Officer stay out side! Im going in!!



to be continued!


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