\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1846000-Familiar-Stranger
Item Icon
Rated: E · Poetry · Romance/Love · #1846000
I'm using a rythm I havent really used before, so any critical comments are appreciated :)
Looking in the eyes of a long familiar stranger,
I long to see his love, reflected from their depths
But what I see are dreams; decaying. In their tombs.

Reaching for the arm of a long familiar stranger,
I long to feel his hand, extending out to mine
But what I feel is gone; memories. Long faded.

Turning from the scene of a long familiar stranger
I long to hear his voice, beseeching my return
But what I hear is their; amusement. They were right.
© Copyright 2012 ~S. M. Alexandria~ (amazingpoetry at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates have been granted non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1846000-Familiar-Stranger