\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1697361-Commitment
Item Icon
by JRVick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ · Poetry · Emotional · #1697361
a brief explanation of a commitment and the careless way many people view them.
Commitment

Men love to hate them
Women cry and moan
Often it is broken
Leaving a path of scorn
Simple little action
Many times in words
So why does a commitment
Leave you in the cold

For some it is a promise
To love and never stray
Keeping only to each other
Until the final day
For some it is a plague
A sentence brining death
To life so full of living
Brining forth a final breath

Those who do not have it
Send wishes for the day
That promise will come to them
Filling their lonely days
Some have it, do not want it
Find ways to bring the void
Giving opportunity
To live a life full of gold

Givers are now takers
Now takers will return
The promise once made to
A person so in love
Such a crazy scene
Royal fucked up mess
The life of a commitment
Finds weary in the rest
© Copyright 2010 JRVick (jrvick at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates have been granted non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1697361-Commitment