a writing exercise from class. I need help with grammar please. |
Write about material possessions that is important to you and why? Winslow—He was given to me at the age of 7 when I was in the hospital for my aplistic anemia. He was soft and clean. Brown-light brown with white on the bottom of his feet. And a white muzzle with a black hard plastic nose that’s smooth and cool to touch. He made me feel good and safe. He was clean (Did I say clean already) and huggable. We been through a lot together; a move across the ocean and back and many tearful nights. Why is he important to me? He was given to me at a very scary time of my childhood and he is soft and huggable, I know I mention that already but that’s why I still have him today and never used any other stuffed animal I gotten before or after him, he was meant to be hug and sleep with. Whenever I went without Winslow I was an adult, one time as a child I went away over night at summer camp [camping] and I even brought him with me risking the kids making fun of me). Now when I am without him I still need something to hug like an extra pillow. Some nights I will find him on a floor and to tired to pick him up by his dog ears. |