The Lost Rabbits

I wrote this story in first grade while participating in Young Authors. I found it recently in a box up in my attic while cleaning today. Even though I won fourth place and got a little ribbon and all, I thought I might copy it to the site and maybe get some feedback on how I can make a little girl's simple story into a children book. I have a little boy that will be two years old next April and wish to write something more his age and with more of a learning feel to it.



Once there lived a little rabbit, Annie. She lived in a rabbit hole with her friends, Robin and Brother Rabbit.

One day they went for a long walk. They walked a long ways.

Then they were lost. Annie, Robin, and Brother Rabbit tried to find their way home.

Brother Rabbit said, "Our footprints! We can follow our footprints back."

They found their way home.

The End.