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by nadia Author IconMail Icon
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hey ya. this is my first post. so? enjoy!
I have a imagination in my mind. but I don't know how to make it real. so I seek website in the internet and I found this web. so... wish will help.

the story is about a woman, sasha that works in magazine company. she's about 30 maybe, or can be 26. I dont know. just decide the age into whatever you want. she has a great boyfriend named tom that live in another city. they're like a perfect couple. but this woman is a bitch. she also has a boyfriend that live in another city too named robert. sasha and tom is about to marry. sasha is very happy because finally she will married the guy she loves, without thinking about robert, at all.
one day, when she is fitting her dress for the marriage, robert called. he said that he wanted to come to see how she doing. she thinks because tom is doing his job abroad, then it'll be fine if robert came to pay a visit. it's just for a while, she thought. at one night, robert asks sasha to go dinner with him. she doesn't know if robert is gonna ask her to marry him. then we he opened the ring box, sasha is spechless. not because she is in a trouble shock, but she is not think about it at all. she can't imagine that robert is gonna be her fiance too. she's very confused.  but she also can't decide which one she's gonna marry. robert? or tom?
sasha loves them both. and if she could marry all, she would. (that's insane!). but her best, danielle reminds her that she MUST choose between them and they can't meet each other. if they did, they'd destroy her. that advice is stuck on her mind. then she decided to think for a few days.
things get worse. tom is back from his trip and wants to stay together with sasha in her apartment. at first she's going to say okay, but she remember about robert and she refuses him, then apologizes to tom. tom said "it's okay. I can tottaly understand you." then he stays in a hotel.
actually, tom and robert live in a same hotel, and same floor. tom is in room 389, while robert is in room 343. it's very close. but they never meet each other, for a while.
sasha can't come to the hotel because she's afraid if there she will meet robert, or tom unpredictly. so if the boys call her to come she just says that she can't and tell the boys the opposite. but like I said, things get worse.... robert and tom meet when they are in the cafe. they share stories and everything. but they don't say about their marital status and such things.

well... it's all in my mind. readers, do you have something to say?? please do help me finish this story. because I don't know how to end it. I know it'll be good if it finished, so please I do need your help, and critic of course. thanks for all :)
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