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Rated: E · Poetry · Relationship · #1520521
A poem above the struggles of love
On Da Road 2 Completion



I’ve tasted Heaven’s Sweet Waters of love,
And my overwhelming longing to taste it again was hell, oh how
I’ve longed for you to smell the rose within me…


I’ve often thought that love was for the birds,
But as every breadth of sunshine of redemptive love, you’ve become
More intoxicating until my heart and soul responds to you only…


Redemptive indeed, instead of condemnation you
Gave comfort, instead of walking away, you walked through with me.
Showing that I am loved and loveable, you know…


You’ll never get a right out of two wrongs, you’ll
Never be able to color a thought, you’ll never be able to touch an
Emotion, but the soul can be shaken on this joyous drive to
Completion to extend the dimension of true love to discover breathless
Passion, dig this…


As water seeks its own level, so goes my love
To seek an equal level of redemptive love in you,
My wife…..


On Da Road 2 Completion
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