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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1401037
The beloved gets offended, then placated.
LOVELY OFFENCE


Why my bowing offends you?
Why my song you dislike, too?

For admiring beauty your,
why these looks of anger pure?

You made gestures a thousand.
Why should one of mine offend?

On your face my eyes got stuck.
That has become my bad luck.

Were you not irritated,
how could I have placated?


• Written in aa, 7-7 format
• Initially written as item no. 834250, which was later deleted. Present static item posted on 15 March 2008.


M C Gupta
23 March, 2004







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