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Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Emotional · #1245435
Its about a Ex Boyfriend takeing his Ex Girlfriend to the Creek.
How does it feel, to be so weak?
Let me take you to the creek.
And drown all your weak ideas.

To feel nothing but bleak.
Alone you are weak.
So seek your own path.

Seek it before you break.
Break under this creek.
Drowning your weak mind.

How does it feel, to be so weak?
Under this bleak life,you
so wish to live.You are weak.

Dead under this creek.
I smile, a smile so unique.
To see you break.
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