Assignment 4

Genesis Class Assignment 4

(1) Although Bradley Hall is regularly populated by students, close study of the building as a structure is seldom undertaken by them.
Although students populate Bradley Hall, they seldom study the building.

(2) It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days.
The bus company will announce the new schedule in the next few days.

(3) Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.
People cause trouble when they disobey safety rules.

(4) A campus rally was attended by more than a thousand students. Five students were arrested by campus police for disorderly conduct, while several others are charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without being issued a permit to do so.
More than a thousand students attended a campus rally at which campus police arrested five students for disorderly conduct. Campus administrators charged several others with organizing a public meeting without a permit.

(5) During the time when I lived in South Carolina, it was my intention to go to college in Florida.
While I lived in South Carolina, I intended to go to college in Florida.

(6) Due to the fact that Jim liked chocolate, he was very upset when the candy company canceled production of his favorite chocolate bar.
Jim was upset when the candy company stopped producing his favorite chocolate bar.

(7) It is absolutely and totally essential that people who enjoy murder mysteries have an admiration for the human faculty of logic.
People who enjoy murder mysteries must admire human logic.

(8) In our company there are wide-open opportunities for professional growth with a company that enjoys an enviable record for stability in the dynamic atmosphere of aerospace technology.
Our company offers stable, professional growth opportunities in aerospace technology.

(9) At this point in time we can't ascertain the reason as to why the screen door was left open.
We don't know why someone left the screen door open.

(10) Joe was an honest and hard working man. Basically, he never gave much consideration to sitting idly about, doing nothing constructive.
(Note: Revise the two sentences in #10 to one sentence and eliminate wordiness.)
Joe was an honest, hard working man who was never idle.