Assignment 3

Genesis Class Assignment 3

My responses are in color.

1. The college that is most effective will offer scholarships.
The most effective college will offer scholarships.

2. Writers with potential will pursue their dreams.
I would leave this sentence intact because I believe "potential writers" and "writers with potential" differ in meaning.

3. She is definitely the best person for the job, for all intents and purposes.
She is the best person for the job.

4. The student with enthusiasm will accept any kind of assignment, especially the ones that improve their individual skills.
The enthusiastic student will accept any assignment, especially if it improves their skills.

5. Basically, this class is actually my favorite, and the assignment, which was recently posted is definitely challenging.
This class is my favorite and the recent assignment is challenging.

6. Reserving a table at that restaurant is sort of difficult and the person showing the most determination will generally stand the best chance of making reservations.
Only the most determined person will successfully reserve a table at that restaurant.

7. The subjects that are considered most important by students are those that have been shown to be useful to them after graduation.
Students consider most important the subjects they have been shown are useful after graduation.

8. It is very unusual to find someone who has never told a deliberate lie on purpose.
It is unusual to find someone who has never told a lie.

9. He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.
He dropped out of school because he needed to help support his family.

10. There are many farmers in the area who are planning to attend the meeting which is scheduled for next Friday.
Many farmers in the area plan to attend next Friday's meeting.