Literally "Died and Gone to Heaven" just read it... |
Silently I'm waiting, I'm waiting in the dark The only sound I'm hearing is the beating of my heart, I squint into the darkness, I see something dart, from one corner to another, just like a work of art. I look again and see it comming, suddenly my eyes are burning, I open them to see it ripping, time and space, my mind is racing. Everything now looks so white, I lift myself I feel so light! I turn to see a beautiful sight, the golden road and rainbow bright. I follow the path to find myself looking at the beauty and all the wealth, I continue, and find the tree of life itself! I eat it's fruit and gain much health. Now I hear some music ringing, I follow it to find them singing, Angel's, voices not one note stinging, I turn to see whom they were clinging, When I saw Him I wanted to cry, My Father! now I know I've died, I raced to Him, I almost fly He lifts me up right by His side. ( Ok this is like... the 2nd peom I've ever written so be nice please. But really tell me what i need to improve and what I did wrong. And the "that's cool"s is also welcome. I hope you liked it. and by the way in case you don't know 'Him' is God or Jesus I don't really care which, cause I'm going to Heaven! ) |