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Review by Ink Lord Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really liked this poem. It has meaning and is full of emotion. I can see what you feel. Great job! Keep writing!
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Review by Ink Lord Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for putting time into simplifying these philosophies! ;) It's about time someone did this. I found the enlightenment particularly interesting.

A piece of advice is to try to add more spacing and make it more user friendly.

But other than that, great work! ;)

One question as well: How do you know this (hobby, job, study, etc.)?
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