This is an amazing work. You capture the hopeless feeling that new parents have and the terror of having a newborn in the house that won't sleep.
When I realized what was going on with the baby monitor I felt real fear for your characters because even though they're nameless and faceless, I can empathize with them.
The ending really threw me for a loop...I expected a different ending I guess, but I'm not complaining. You had me on the edge of my seat for the entirety of my reading experience.
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