That was fantastic. The mix of descriptive detailed words were joined together perfectly making it smooth to read. You also brought out the feelings the sword would have if it were a living being. It's feelings were so well presented that i really started to feel for the sword towards the end, even though its joy was to kill. Another good point to mention is that your sentence sizes were bang on as well. Not too short and not too long, which some descriptive writers tend to have trouble with, finding the right balance.
I give this a solid rating of 5. Well deserved for such a fantastic piece of writing.
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