Good poem. Like what its saying. Should revise again you made a few errors (e.g my my) Also have a few misspellings. Always revise. Overall Great poem!
This poem is very deep! I love the picture you picked to go with it as well! Even though its sort of a love poem it has this coldness about it. Overall great poem. By far my favorite that I've read so far!
I get what you're saying here. Though I was a little confused at first I understand. This is a great observation and you should continue to do so. Keep it up!
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