I really enjoyed reading this! The descriptions are wonderful. I could visualize the world you describe and I felt all its charm... I was attracted to it as if under a spell... I love the attention to detail and the atmosphere you so skillfully build. Very well written!!
This poem is very well written and it has a nice flow. I truly enjoy the depths and richness of it! I find it extremely thought provoking and I like its immediacy and the way it leads you straight to the core... It gave me a strong emotional response,making me feel nostalgic and full of hope at the same time...
This is a fantastic piece of writing...
I love its intensity and the way it allows the reader to feel the different tonalities of the emotions described.
I had strong responses to this piece and I felt eager to carry on reading, almost as a way to "make the wait more tolerable". I think this piece has great psychological depths and it's extremely well written. Thank you so much for sharing it!!
I truly loved reading this story!
I particularly like the way in which Fred's character slowly emerges in all of his psychological depths. The narration from his point of view greatly contributes to the feeling of living in his mind for the duration of the story...
The story is very well written and the humor in it is just brilliant! I would have probably concluded the story by repeating "Buzzzzz ... Clunk ... Buzzzzz ... Clunk... what's that sound?" That's just my opinion though and this is only my first review!
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