\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/yuvetalia
Review Requests: OFF
5 Public Reviews Given
5 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
for entry "Chapter 7" Open in new Window.
Review by fantasyduo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
day by day this gets more intricately captivating!...read word for word through the seven chapters and wish that you keep going on!
suavely structured and highly addictive! Just stop with the suspense already!ha.just kidding.
taking nothing away from you,i think you could get better with the descriptions!keep writing!
2
2
Review of A New World  Open in new Window.
Review by fantasyduo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
well, great and emotional piece i have to admit.giving you credit for that.
laudable piece in addition to that.i however find and think that you have compressed too much emotion in a few lines, a task which you could have done better in more stanzas.
taking nothing away from you though, write on!
2 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/yuvetalia