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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the cadence in this! Plus, it's so concise and suitably evocative.
"Fingers cold, I reach the summit..." is just so...expressive: of the mindset and the setting of the 'I' in the story. Perhaps I'm a bit confused that this happens 'each morning' - I guess it's 'each morning' of the onset of winter. Either way, I'm not great with poetry, but I just had to let his be known!
Have a nice day!
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