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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Exquisite. Absolutely enjoyed it. Thank you for the great work!

I can honestly offer no advice, only encouragement. If the story is truly a personal tale of yours, then I also offer genuine, heartfelt best wishes that everything turns out well and that the Freedom Station turns out to be a great place. You're a tough person to have made it through the rough ride, but keep going, and hopefully the future can only be brighter.

Good luck and God speed. Would absolutely love to hear how things turn out at the destination.

All the best,
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Review of Tears of Remorse  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a morbid story. Sad to hear of such things in this world of ours.

Great, truly great verse. Deep and cuts to the core.

Well done.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done. Takes true courage to make lyrics simple and sweet. I like it. Nice rhyming lines with deep feeling. Good job showing a depth of emotion. The song wants you to believe it is sad, but what truly shines through is hope.

I feel you purposefully emphasized the word "past", though. Is there hidden meaning in there beyond the clear facade? Not to sound like a grammar freak also, but "yesterday's world". Apostrophes always are tricky buggers.

All in all, great job. Keep doing what you're doing. Can't wait to hear the tune!
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