Excellent story, but I have to ask something incredibly important. I have a working knowledge of everything Greek and mythological, but I havn't the slightest idea what you creatures are. At first I thought they were an original take on the gorgons, but then they turned into a dog... Would you mind shedding some light?
I love it, but as a die hard fan and a stickler, i must point one thing out.
'Like him she didn't want to be in a powerful family.' That is not true of Loki. He doesn't like his family because he isn't the head of it.
My only complaint is that we wouldn't know it was Slendy if you hadn't told us. It's a great story, but I mean, anything could look like a man and kidnap children, but only Slenderman can have tentacles on his back and no face.
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