Your first love wasnt to great was it? You write alot about now that your old and wiser.
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This is cute. I dont see how Santa come in to the equation though.... Keep writing.
X the Z
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This is good. Its cute, but sad at the same time. Im not sure how to interpret this. But love it. Keep it up.
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Looking to get sued are you? If not by Rick Riordan, then by Dominique McCormickc. I always ask permision before I put a character, esecially a name, in a story. Speaking of which, may I use you in a story? Its about my 7th grade year. (i dont have photographic memory, so its not exact.)
Um.... what? Maybe its because I have no idea what the Seven Sins are, but This was weird.
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I love it. Its not very scary, but its funny. Just one thing... wouldnt her mom notice she was gone? Other than that, its flawless. If I were a character, Id be the old lady. ...providing i was of that gender... um anyway i love the story. Love it. Your a good writer. :D Keep it up!
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...Ok, Id say Jack got ahold of some steriods. Claws, rubber skin (Jacks 325 years old, hes paler than a alligators belly), and sharp teeth? Fits description. All you see is his shadow and whats left of his victoms? Sounds like the ripper. Love it! I want it noted, since you wrote this first, that I didnt even have an account when Jack was created in my demented imagination, plus hes unnaturally skinny.
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