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Review of Expansion Virus  Open in new Window.
Review by WW2_Man Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In all honesty this is my favorite series on Writing.com it has pregnacy sometimes with expansion, breast and butt expansion, hip growth, and some other great subject matters. But I confess the best parts are written by the original author skeletorio whose writing has been sorely missed over the last two years since their last interactive chapter writing, in all honesty I wish they would return as very few authors have had as much success continuing the story due to differing writing styles such as being "as large as a bus instantaneously" where the original author would make the growth slow with spurts of growth occurring over time or a one time burst of growth due to a stimulus all the while crafting a story. At the end of the day you should read this story the early parts are some of the finest that you will find on this site, but be sure that you read more than one chain of the story as you might be on one of the less polished sections and I would hate for you to miss out based on one poor experience.
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Review by WW2_Man Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Alright we need some basic formatting and some revisions to better describe the transformation. I would also suggest the transformation be made in stages via a longer a chapter meaning you can keep whats going on but don't just have them be bigger instantly describe it to the audience it really helps me imagine in my head what is happening. If you wanna talk about this series I would love to hear your thoughts.
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