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Review by Bill Fisher Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very amusing and an interesting take on a ubiquitous item. I love how you said he goes about his day-to-day duty (doody!) What an appropriate and clever use of alliteration to achieve a "tongue-in-cheek" effect. Love the ending as well..brings back painful memories. Super job!
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