I enjoyed this story a lot!
It kept me glued to my seat and curious about "the sound".
The story was built up very well and the ending left me wishing there was more!
I'm so glad that I came across your story.
I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors, the plot flows together well.
Keep on writing!
~Erica
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