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Review by Scythe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
not bad..a few mistakes that i saw.
Plotline is decent...grammar is ok...

Not a bad piece overall to read.
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Review of ben the dog  Open in new Window.
Review by Scythe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
just so you know..I'm not trying to be mean....

There were a lot of things about this story that kinda sabotaged it.

1. You didn't include parentheses when there was dialogue...when the dogs were talking, you kept out the " " symbols.
2. You spaced out the wording in the beginning...then bunched it all up later on.
3. The story was very choppy..." he did this..she went here...we did this.." I as the reader lost interest very early on.
4. You misspelled a lot of the words..some just by a letter.

You have the start of a great story...just need to refine it some.
Maybe take a writing class..or do some studying on writing styles and stuff.

Hope this wasn't too harsh....good luck in the future.
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Review by Scythe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
these are all great options...

You could find good and bad things for each....

This really makes you think....
Awesome job!
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Review by Scythe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
speaking truthfully....

I can't say that writing.com is the best...because i haven't seen and/or experienced the other sites out there....

But overall,
I think it is a great site to express your creativity and style.
Everyone here is kind and generous.

I would defenitely recommend it to anyone who wants to write or just express themselves.
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