I'm not really use to a lot of non ryming forms to give any opinion there, but you show a lot of emotion and the sarcasm is aparant. I can really relate to a lot of it. You say a lot without saying exactly what happened. I found that writing about it freed me from the embarrasment of feeling like a fool and the shame of not wanting people to know. The only things I would change would be the tittle and description. They're a little misleading on what to expect. It's not really a positive outlook. It's more of a realistic look back and facing that you're better off without that person and trying to look up that hopefully there are better people out there. Thank you for your review of Believing in Love. I would love to get it ending on a high note with a reach like a Kelly Clarkston type voice if you can imagine that. Keep writing and keep your hopes up.
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