Its a shame that poetry is hostage to the limitations of the reader. I had to use a dictionary just to make sure I had the correct contextual understanding.
Clearly you're going through (or went through) something. I get a feeling of " woe as me" and victim mentality as I reread it a few times. The title is a perfect fit. Be careful of leaving words out by mistake.
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