Okay, this is a great poem. It is short and sweet. It makes a point and rhymes very well. I can understand the feelings you are trying to convey and I hpoe that you feel better!
This is a very descriptive and relatable poem. This is also something I struggle with. I see no errors and it has great tone and rhythm. I am giving you 3000 which is a lot since i do not really have much but you'll use it better than i could:)
Don't stop writing, this is so much more than just talent!
This poem is very well put together and proves several points. In this world, failure is inevitable but that should not mean that we do not try. With that being said, if we did not fail, we would not learn. Amazing job!
I just want to say on a personal note that this is very deep and I want to encourage you to share it with as many people as possible. You cant ever underestimate the power of words!
This is a poem that is full of emotion and is well thought out. Although it is not set like most forms with ABA or the normal rhythm poems tend to have its the syllables. Great job.
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