This made for a really lovely read! I loved your rhyme scheme as it gave a nice flow to the poem, and your use of imagery was really powerful. I think it really resonates with everyone because it is such a shared emotional experience. You capture the consistent hope for better days really well! Sidenote: I've recently written a short piece of praise on the same topic, check it out if you like!
Wow, this was really powerful. Your use of rhythm creates a nice flow to the poem, and the structure further enhances its message. You create a very strong tone of a persona who feels lost. The somewhat sudden ending to the poem is quite chilling. Overall, a really powerful piece!
This is beautiful! I've only just joined this site and the emotion in your piece resonates with me quite well. I love your delicate use of sibilance and assonance, it makes for a very pleasant read. And your use of imagery has a very euphoric tone! I really enjoyed this piece.
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