well, there was no spelling errors as I could see, and you changed lines so it was easyer to read, but ofcorse then im not TAHT pikcy as some ppl are, so instead of just GIVING YOU 5, im THINKING about it, and THINKING BACK on what i read! although, i dident read ALL of it, just the first and then the campfire nd interactive stories, becos thats what i read, so, and i guess you dont nead GIFT POINTS since your THE QUEEN and all XD lol, so i guess you have like, A BILION gift points or someting! XD lol, well i have extended 500 caracters so i better wrap this up, and sorry for soem spelling errors, im not englihs, but i have become ALOT better than i was when i FIRST started! :)
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