It was a good short story, but some it didn't seem very well thought of. Maybe you weren't that into? You did a good job on it so keep up the good work mate!
Great job I like the way you put the words together and the small ryming you inserted. Its a sad story to tell but at least you can. I was also in a bad family. But as their kids we should learn from them and not act the same way, repeating mistakes is not the way to go. Just remember they can't control you and you have your own life to live. Just think about your own future to come and how good you can make it.
Not bad atleast for a high school poem. Alot of emotion in it which is a good and bad thing but it worked out for the best good job. Just remember that high school is a confusing time for every one mainly for love connections.
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