Well, I have to say that the first story line was definitely interesting to read. I really enjoyed it!
Some things I just wanted to say was, the back story was intriguing at first, but the whole aggression thing seemed to strike me as an overused cliche for story lines. But still, it was great!
The psychic battle between Will and Nayo got me a little confused at first, but once I understood what was going it, I just loved it!
All the things I can say about the first story. I really would like to see what happens to the other characters, though.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/wolffurry
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.13 seconds at 10:41pm on Nov 10, 2024 via server WEBX2.