A scary but realistic look at our best or worst time of life. One wants to see the best but realism always gets in the way. Shucks,another bite in the butt of the golden years! Life goes on, keep up the writing. You have a good touch and hit were it hurts!
Other than the mixup in names in the first termination letter this was another fine story. It surely points out the error in making hasty judgements and quick decisions without checking the facts.This is the first time I have seen you misuse names in one of your stories so I would still rate this story very high! Keep up the excellent writing.
Great finish; held your interest throughout; wonderful solution to real problem, instead of shooting the mutt [which is what I expected you to do] you made a right out of a wrong! Nice job! You have a good sense of balance while using humor to make a point and solve what could have resulted in a very serious conflict. Again, nice job!
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