Yo dude this is a great book get it published. The characters that you use are envisionable. the story is very easy to follow (don't ask how many books I literally get lost in the many twists) Your use of description is impecable. you don't overdo the details but you give me a clear picture of the story and the events that happen. You really need to consider getting this seiries (please make it a seiries) the newest top seller. I don't joke about this so please at least consider and please keep on writing
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