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Review of Begin  Open in new Window.
Review by Long John Silver Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am "Beholden" to you for this awesome poem. Your metaphor of a snowy landscape awaiting fresh footprints just blew me away.New snowfall of the author's intent is so good.As a free lance artist I see this working for that application too.It also reminds me of many times when I have painted over one piece of work with a pure white layer to reuse the canvas. We do that each day with a new start.

Dawn brings beginnings
Sunset clears the page
losing or winnings
it changes as we age.

I will be back to check out more of your thought-provoking style. Good work, my friend.
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Review of The Librarian  Open in new Window.
Review by Long John Silver Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is cool and I love the last line. I'll bet that librarian sends away a lot more people.
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Review of On The Beach  Open in new Window.
Review by Long John Silver Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hey, I'm hooked. Now I have to read all your stuff and I'm tired so I will come back tomorrow. Great work pal.
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Review of Can I Watch?  Open in new Window.
Review by Long John Silver Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so cool! Fast paced and informative. I learned something and you piqued my interest. Now I have to go look this subject up on line. Great writing my man.
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Review of They Dote On Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Long John Silver Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow, this was good. It's funny I thought it was going to end with a twist. I thought the old man had been duped into helping the woman commit suicide. That would be a good story too wouldn't it? You could write an alternate ending like that.
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